The Lucky 7 Meme Rules
■Go to page 77 of your current MS/WIP
■Go to line 7
■Copy down the next 7 lines–sentences or paragraphs–and post them as they’re written. No cheating.
■Tag 7 authors
■Let them know
I'm revising/rewriting my YA WIP, so it's not in a place where I feel comfortable sharing, even a snippet. Instead, here are 7 lines from the first MS I ever wrote, Fumped. In this scene, my protagonist and her ex-best friend are learning how to use torches in an art class.
Up until then, we’d just used little hand-held map gas
torches whenever we needed to heat any of the metals up. But for some projects,
like when you have to use molten metal in a centrifuge, you need more power
than a map gas can provide. I definitely needed to pay close attention to
instructions for the oxy-acetylenes so I didn’t wind up singing off my eyebrows
at a later date. Focus, Jocelyn, focus.
“Holy crap, Button. I am so freaking freaked out!” Alex reached over and clutched my arm as Mr. O’Neill
used the striker to start the flame. It glowed blue-hot and liquefied some
scrap silver in minutes. “I don’t even like lighting matches after Zack farts!”
she continued as she dug her nails into my forearm.
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| My favorite beta reader's comment on a page of this MS. (My favorite beta is my mom.) |
Well, there you go. Seven random lines and I still managed to hit a reference to farting. I'm not really sure what that says about my work. :)
Have you posted for the meme? Leave a link to your snippet below! If not, consider yourself tagged!


6 comments:
I LOVE this! Great snippet! Thanks so much for sharing and LOVE your mom's comment. :) My mother would NEVER write that. I don't think I can show her anything with a curse word in it.
Also, I love the title. I am so intrigued!
I love that note from your mother! Classic.
Haha! Love the comment from your mom and the fact that you included a fart reference. Too funny :)
Thanks for sharing a snippet of your WiP. I love getting to see what people are working on, and this definitely looks like something I'd read. Like Alison, I love the title and would love to read more :)
Oh my goodness... I was all in awe of your seven lines, then I read your beta's comment and cracked up! I like your mom already. :) Great Seven, Rebecca. I'm so glad you posted!
Great lines...love the fart comment and the note from your mom...she sounds like a perfect Beta.
Thanks for sharing!
Oooh, I love it! Thanks for sharing! :-D
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